limbic mud

[ts!lo]

here's something i don't know if it's worth the reading...


limbic mud
garden beneath sacred breath
whose nectar is limp in her ghost's crystal bed
tongue that's purple, stale from ancient books
crushes and relaxes,
he touches life's ashes
into his appetite's infinite buttons
a spray to drink whips stones into summer sweat
screams with his whispers by vapor's warm mess
conscious, blind
can show the blind
creamy thunder spreading a promise all over salivary hands
stomach toilet flushed in his shadow's metered lust
his ego blasts
his egg's cast
she embraces and licks them all
like salt, tequila, lime?
tequilalimesalt?
to kill a time's fault
here's a little salt
an ice to make you halt
roses drew back
it is the little buds' season
your face is c'mon'ed and slapped
into and out of the limbic mud's treason

[*Leo the Lioness*]

i was well worth the reading......it was run to read, actually *G

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[sweet-pea]

Excellent, I love it!

[5Cats]

I had to look up "limbic" and "limbic system" in my trusty dictionary! The parts of the brain concerned with emotions and motivation... hummmm.
I like the unusual imagry, eg: "her ghost's crystal bed" and "salivary hands" ...cool.

[ts!lo]

it's much better to read replies than actually write something that's unacknowledged....i really appreciate your comments!

[*Leo the Lioness*]

my sentiments exactly.....